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very good
the B in burn is a little awkward and you might want to fill in the white spaces between the letters with black or something so the words pop out more
:iconkingdomhearts13:
I didn't really want the words to pop out. I wanted them to be kind of mooshed together so they were harder to read. Thank you, though. C:
:iconinkstainedsword:
I like it ^^ simple, but it could mean a lot.
I just want to know what the words say though...*tilts head*

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They keep talking about drafting a Constitution for Iraq. Why don't we just give them ours? It was written by a lot of really smart guys, it's worked for over 200 years and we're not using it anymore.
:iconkingdomhearts13:
Lol. I don't even remember. I just put random words that popped into my head.
:iconfeyne:
I like it! All I could reccomend is to perhaps make the letters bolder, so that there's a better contrast between the black of the letters, the white of the bubble, and the blue background. Great job, though!
:iconkingdomhearts13:
I want the words to be all jumbled and harder to distinguish cuz that's how it is sometimes. You just don't know what you're feeling and it's all so unclear. Thanks, though. :D

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